GhengisJohn

I thought this was going to be about something you experienced on a boat. I mean in a way it was, just not at the hands of other players.

Guys, this is good. Pair it with a sale on enchant runes (to make them tantalizing enough for people to use as opposed to just booming their stuff and making new stuff) and you should rake in some dough.

As somebody who's watched a lot of anime I can tell you exactly how we make this work. It's Lann's first day at Colhein High Academy Prep. On the way to school he meets this weird girl named Fiona running with a hammer in her mouth. They crash into each other then she tells him to watch where he's going! Instantly they hate each other. It turns out though that they're both headed to Colhein high and they BOTH have homeroom with Professor Aodhan! WHAT ARE THE CHANCES? Since they already seem to know each other after Lann's EMBARASSING introduction, Fiona is tasked with helping Lann learn the ropes-- Did I forget to mention that Colhein High is a school where students LEARN TO BATTLE MONSTERS!?!

Complete originality and hilarious hijinks ensue.

Characters:

Fiona: Super serious about killing monsters. Tsundere.
Delia: Petite but freakishly strong rich girl. Ends all her sentences in desu.
Lynn: Wants to be a pop star.
Arisha: Can't cook. Super Clumsy. Always falling down.
Vella: Super forward. Immediately infatuated with Lann due to mutual love of twin swords. Always making backhanded remarks towards Fiona.
Evie: Fiona's bookish best friend. She's snarky and super smart.
Lann: Comical protagonist who came to the school by mistake. Decides he wants to learn how to be a hero but he still winds up knocked down a lot.
Kai: Super cool guy who's actually not comfortable with people standing too close to him.
Hurk: The affable lunkhead who talks in a countryside accent and uses oversized versions of everything.
Sylas: Lann's flashy chief rival who somehow manages to always look cool.
Karok: The black guy. He's an exchange student I think?
Kishimoto: The junior gnoll chieftain who's always doing silly stuff in the background.

Colhein NPC's are scattered around as staff or other students. Gallagher is the lecherous photography teacher, Shayla is the slutty sexy nurse, Ceara and Marrec are always hanging out in the halls together, etc.

Hallmarks of the show include slutty outfitters, giant monsters and rousing music that plays every time somebody pops trans.

Trust me, animate this and you'll get at least 4 seasons out of it.

Going back to the topic at hand, I am not looking for a win here. I am simply wanting judges/gm feedback on what THEY believe I could have done better, and in which criteria was lacking score.

As previously stated, the assumption was actually spot on. I attempted a hieroglyph style carving for Ancient Lakoria. I do not see why my pumpkin is being targeted here, but it is interesting that there were not more winners, when the winners themselves seem to believe there should have been more winners.

On a more positive note, I did not let my Lakoria pumpkin rot, in fact it is now a half eaten delicious pumpkin pie~

I was planning on cooking braha, sort of like cosmic justice. He eats me, I eat him, cycle of life. But then I lifted up the lid about 10 minutes ago and it's getting moldy already. Aw come on. Can you beleive that Blizzard contest pumpkins had to be carved by the 26th? No way those were making it 5 days to halloween. Just last night at around 2am I turned the light off in there and there was no mold. I'm kind of amazed really, lol.

I am just disappointed in how they handle the criteria, why have one if you aren't going to force it. One of the winners just doesn't cut it, lack of creativity and artistic skill and I'm sure everyone can notice how bland and boring theirs is compared to the other winners..

Harsh to say, but it's the hard truth.

Thanks for the feedback, I guess.

Well if I may be harsh, your pumpkin wasn't so great that you have any grounds to be rude to any of the other participants. There's a lot in your own work to take stock of before you lash out at others.

How is there a winner's list if the contest is still ongoing...

EDIT:

submitted an entry exactly 1 minute before the official deadline...can we at least get judged? I thought our idea was really cool even if we're not as technically skilled as some of the winners

If I may judge your entry it's pretty awesome imo man. I think it's cool that you also hit upon the idea to make a Braha-Lantern and I like that you depicted both sides/aspects of Braha. The different colored lights were a really nice touch and they look pretty cool.